I have selected my final paper, “Traditional Dating vs. Internet Dating,” as my “Writer’s Choice” pick. I feel that this piece is my strongest writing piece of the quarter, aside from the blog assignments.
I spent a lot of time developing the thesis and ideas in this paper. My thesis, “Internet dating is challenging the role of traditional dating by offering a high-tech, convenient and easy, yet sometimes deceitful, way of establishing new intimate personal relationships.” My thesis touched on the main points that I went into depth on in the rest of the essay.
Recently, I had a close friend of mine try out an Internet dating service and I was able to incorporate some of her firsthand views and opinions to make the points stronger. I was able to take her ideas and incorporate them with my own to make the paper stronger.
I spent a lot of time developing the thesis and ideas in this paper. My thesis, “Internet dating is challenging the role of traditional dating by offering a high-tech, convenient and easy, yet sometimes deceitful, way of establishing new intimate personal relationships.” My thesis touched on the main points that I went into depth on in the rest of the essay.
Recently, I had a close friend of mine try out an Internet dating service and I was able to incorporate some of her firsthand views and opinions to make the points stronger. I was able to take her ideas and incorporate them with my own to make the paper stronger.
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